I love the layers of depth in this piece. the chalk gives it a great texture, almost making your art look like it is made from folded paper! I especially love how crisp your edges are and the strong color contrast between the foreground and the background.
the only critique I can think of is some of the shading on the neck looks slightly off.
Side note: your WIP is not a public link. you might want to fix that.
Oops, I'll fix that
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